the drone
the swirl
the whirl pool
the hurt
the pinch
was an insider’s job
but the question was
did you not see it?
did they not do it?
Silence stood witness.
Sometime later she stopped asking
stood straight
walked a mile
stretched a hand and smiled.
Adhyapika 
8 responses to “Catch the moment”
I love this so much. This is so creative and short and beautiful, lovely writing! Definitely one of my favorite posts I’ve read for the day, so I’ll be leaving a link to this post on my blog. Great job 🙂
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Thank you so much Jessica 🙂
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Your use of words in this poem are fantastic! 😀
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Love to hear you liked it..gonna write more,write more 🙂
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Hi Clare
Thank you so much for your appreciation. Keeps me going 🙂
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a concise, precise piece of poetry! very nice!
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Thank you Tara. Thrilled to hear you liked it:-)
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Tara thank so much dear. Glad you found it interesting. Your appreciation helps me to write more 🙂
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